And it sucked, according to my tutor. And, yes I guess it does, now that he’s pointed out all the obvious flaws in it. I mean, I knew it was pretty immature when I sent it, but wow, I surpass myself with crapness.
He also kept putting e.c. and a double line under capitals after speach, as if that wasn’t right, as if it should be, ‘”Blah,” she said.’ But I know that: ‘”Blah.” She said.’ is gramatically correct, so I don’t know what he’s talking about.
Final thoughts: I suck. On to the next one.
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