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It's okay, but...
I'm worried I might be being too verbose. I know, with Nano that's not supposed to be a problem, but I did want to write my novel so that it ended at 50k. That should mean that I should have 12,500 words for the begining, 25k for the middle and 12,500 for the end. But I've got to 13,600 and they're still at day 2, on their way to mars...
See I had it worked out like this:
Start - Asuka [A] and Gurn [G] get approched by Brianna [B] and G is told, by B, to go to mars. A and G get to mars. G goes to see The Organisation [O]. The O tell G what they want him to do.
Middle - A finds out indipendantly of G what the O want G to do. A also finds out additional info about G, the O and the job. A and G have a fight about the job. A and G make up, and plan the job. B gets involved [sexually] with G somehow, and so A and G write her into the plan. B gets killed.
End - A and G pull off job, screwing MOW and the O over in the process and saving G's Da. A and G fly into the sunset, and probably some kind of drinking establishment.
So you see, by now they should have not only gotten to mars, and Gurn recived his instructions, but asuka shopuld be in her final stages of finding out about the job. But instead, they are still in space, and asuka is still in the beginig stages of her investigation. Gah! These two do far to much thinking for their own good [since that's where most of the words are coming from]. I guess the only solution is to keep ploding on and hope for the best I think.